I really like the visuals, and also what you want to say with it!
The only thing is: does this communicate? Maybe you will need to add another layer of info to make sure your concept speaks that message. It can be interesting also visually.
Look at the works of metahaven and maureen mooren. They also often use these kind of techniques added with a layer of typography to expand the meaning of it all.
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I really like the visuals, and also what you want to say with it!
The only thing is: does this communicate?
Maybe you will need to add another layer of info to make sure your concept speaks that message.
It can be interesting also visually.
Look at the works of metahaven and maureen mooren. They also often use these kind of techniques added with a layer of typography to expand the meaning of it all.